What has also improved is the editing, this can be seen in the sense that in the extract the cuts work a lot better as it cuts on action when Aaron is walking and also is on screen for the right amount of time in terms of the shots that build up to the reveal of the dead body on the floor, this is a lot better to what was done in the preliminary task as the cuts are slightly delayed compared to what they are now.
What has also improved is the sense of Mise En Scene, in the shots in the preliminary task it is not that interesting compared to what is shown in the opening seqeunce, this is because in the car park it shows the charecters as a lot more iscolated which is very effective compared to a simple classroom.
These shots here show a clear ecample of how I have made progression from the preliminary task to now, as shown here on the first image the camera is not exactly placed in the best position as it is a high angle shot which creates the wrong mood we wanted, however if you compare it to the shot we used in our opening it is a lot more conventional as we placed the camera on the floor which I feel is a lot more better suited and the framing appears a lot better and also seems to be building up to something quick as the cuts our quite fast and we do not know much to what is going on.


